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I wish I knew

10 March 2009 20 Comments

Written by 3tcs_11

Am no good in poetry  ;-)  not at all!! But ,I think at times poems could express feelings better..

This is something i scribbled down for someone so special.This is something i scribbled down for someone i call my sister!

Well, I dont think you can call this a poem either.But this is what I feel just now.!

 

This is for you my swis! :)

 


 

I WisH I knew

Everyday you bring sunshine,

Spread the rays of serene in me.

I wish if only i could tell you,

Or knew just what to say.

 

 

For everytime,I see you down,

Hiding worries with the best of smiles,

I wish I could comfort you

If I knew just what to say.

 

For everytime I see your face,

Touch your hand or hear your voice,

I imagine you’d be all mine

If I knew just what to say.

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20 Comments »

  • Rubin Geo Varghese
    Rubin Geo Varghese said:

    nice one da,, :)

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  • 3tcs_11
    3tcs_11 (author) said:

    Thanchya!! :P

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  • Jibin mathews
    Jibin mathews said:

    mmmm :O

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  • 3tcs_11
    3tcs_11 (author) said:

    enthu patti???

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  • Jibin mathews
    Jibin mathews said:

    onnulaa…thnkin of modifying it :P

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  • 3tcs_11
    3tcs_11 (author) said:

    modifying it???!!??

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  • Jibin mathews
    Jibin mathews said:

    yea…..a love song polendu..rubin must hav already modified this….:P

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  • 3tcs_11
    3tcs_11 (author) said:

    hmm who told ya that u cant love ur sis!???

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  • Jibin mathews
    Jibin mathews said:

    oh i said this can also be used in that way ennu..i was jus jokin !

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  • Rakesh.R ¶DnC¶
    Rakesh.R ¶DnC¶ said:

    jibin gt a false eye… seeing all negatives…

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  • Rubin Geo Varghese
    Rubin Geo Varghese said:

    luv cant b seen in ny one angle,,it has 360 degree(or more!!) ;)
    i felt it,,really i did!! :)

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  • milan_cs_09
    milan_cs_09 said:

    neeyum oru rubin aakuvaano?? :D

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  • Rubin Geo Varghese
    Rubin Geo Varghese said:

    mone tritty,,nannayi varu,, ;)

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  • avi
    avi said:

    hey nice poem!!!
    but…..
    You cud hav ended it more responsibilyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • 3tcs_11
    3tcs_11 (author) said:

    hehe thankz for the response.

    @avi
    yeah i wanted to..
    but

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  • 3tcs_11
    3tcs_11 (author) said:

    @RubinCheta

    hehe tht was really encouraging :)

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  • vani_cs
    vani_cs said:

    well rubin;3t loves his swis so u dont need 2 comment on dat he he he

    3tz it was a gudone i just loved it

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  • 3tcs_11
    3tcs_11 (author) said:

    no comments :-P

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  • JINO ANN VARGHESE
    JINO ANN VARGHESE said:

    edaa e poem ne patti njaan oru cmnt paranjotte??

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  • 3tcs_11
    3tcs_11 (author) said:

    cheytho!! hehe

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